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“You are not out of business. But your homepage is trying.”
The copy prioritizes description over persuasion. Sentences are long, abstract, and feature-led.
The business may be viable, but the presentation is actively hurting sales. Primary cause: Vague positioning. If even 51% of lost visitors were recoverable buyers, the fixes below pay for themselves in the first month.
Abstract, feature-led language that could describe any business in your category.
Forms, steps, or decisions that cost more attention than the visitor has committed.
Multiple leaks compound. Fixing the top two typically recovers the majority of lost conversions.
The visitor can't tell if this works for someone in their exact situation.
Nothing gives the visitor a reason to act now instead of never.
Generic titles and headings mean search engines and AI assistants can't tell what you sell or recommend you.
Passable, but leaving conversions on the table.
Passable, but leaving conversions on the table.
Passable, but leaving conversions on the table.
Passable, but leaving conversions on the table.
Passable, but leaving conversions on the table.
Passable, but leaving conversions on the table.
Passable, but leaving conversions on the table.
Passable, but leaving conversions on the table.
Holding up. Keep it that way.
Holding up. Keep it that way.
Abstract, feature-led language that could describe any business in your category.
Forms, steps, or decisions that cost more attention than the visitor has committed.
Multiple leaks compound. Fixing the top two typically recovers the majority of lost conversions.
The visitor can't tell if this works for someone in their exact situation.
Nothing gives the visitor a reason to act now instead of never.
Innovative solutions for modern teams.
Name the buyer. Name the outcome. Name the timeframe. In one sentence.
Learn More
See My Price
(missing)
One specific result, one real name, one number — placed directly under the hero.
- Replace 'Learn More' with an outcome verb: 'Get the Fix Plan', 'Book My Slot', 'See My Price'.
- Repeat the primary CTA every one to two screens — never make the visitor scroll back up to convert.
- One page, one action. Demote or remove every competing link near the CTA.
- Place a guarantee or risk-reversal statement directly beneath the primary CTA.
- Convert your best client result into a one-line stat and place it above the fold.
- If you have zero social proof, use a founder guarantee. Skin in the game reads as proof.
Visual hierarchy does not guide the eye through the persuasion sequence. Key elements compete for attention.
The mobile experience shows layout compression, small tap targets, and buried CTAs — where the majority of traffic converts.
Metadata, headings, and entity signals are too generic for search or AI answer engines to classify the offer.
| # | Fix | Impact | Effort | Detail |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Cut the copy in half, then half again | medium | low | Every remaining sentence must name a pain, a proof, or a payoff. |
| 2 | Delete every non-essential field and step | medium | low | Ask for the minimum to deliver value. Earn the rest later. |
| 3 | Fix leaks in priority order | high | medium | Highest impact, lowest effort first. Re-measure after each fix. |
| 4 | Answer the three silent objections | high | medium | 'Will it work for me?', 'What if it doesn't?', 'Why you?' — answer all three on the page. |
| 5 | Add one honest deadline | medium | low | Capacity, cohort, price change, or seasonal reason — real urgency only. Fake timers burn trust. |
The audit found the leaks. Now let us fix them.
Fix Sprints start at $999 — hero rewrite, CTA restructure, proof architecture, and mobile hierarchy, implemented by the Cooked AI team.
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